I usually try to balance positive and negative critique, but sometimes - and especially when I see really bad things - I just cannot help but mention it here as well. Latest 'incident' was a harmless email to my local government body with the intent to change my address.
Optimize your webpage to avoid emails
The reason I sent the email in the first place was that I couldn't find any form or document that would allow me to change my address online.
So, I tried to locate a tab or menu entry called 'contact' or similar (no luck), checked the footer (no luck) and eventually found the complete address with generic email (chief-on-duty@government) next to the logo - which showed me once more that users tend to look for certain elements in common places rather than even prominent locations.
Anyway, I figured this email address would do it and I shot my note to change my address. Here is the (automated) response:
Dear mail sender! The employee you have selected is out of office and can be reached again on June 29th, inquires will not be processed.
Wow, now what? Should I send my message again in two days (which I probably will)? Can I trust these guys to fix my address at all? Seems like there is no organization behind it. I have no chance to stop by because I'm out of the country but maybe I need to pick up the phone and call instead, how annoying. No big deal for a simple change of address but this slip can potentially damage your image and seriously reduce trust for other sorts of inquires, right?
Update: Today I received a very nice and personal response telling me that my address was updated. I will in return send a nice and personal note pointing out above issues. Let's hope for the best.
But now, here are the
Design Guidelines for transactional email
Avoid being mistaken for spam.
Enhance company’s reputation and increase users’ confidence.
Be precise and answer all relevant questions.
Provide recognizable brand name in ‘From’ field.
Add clearly distinguishable transaction to ‘From’ field.
Keep ‘From’ field shorter than 20 characters.
Explicitely relate ‘Subject’ field to a customer-initiated transaction.
Avoid unnecessary message sequences (e.g. transaction confirmation + shipping confirmation; order summary not necessary anymore).
Start the ‘Content’ with the information that matters most.
Solution to my inquiry above
First of all, unless the whole department was moved, closed or is on vacation I would not expect a vacation response mail for an email sent to a generic address. Secondly, automated responses are ok if they state that a human response will follow promptly, usually within 24 hours.
What would have been a better response? Maybe: "Thank you, your inquiry has been received and will be processed by our team within the next couple of days. You will be notified once your request is processed or if we have further questions." And then some more specific information like contact names with alternative email and/or telephone numbers could follow. Maybe even some links that answer common questions or point the requester to common documents, be creative.
What are your experiences with transactional email?
How do you handle transactional email on your company webpage? What are your experiences? Any lessons learned (the hard way)?
Just some weeks ago I wrote about Design Guidelines for 404 Pages. Closely related are Error Messages in general, and believe me, they will save your life. That's why you need to get them right!
Why bad error message can hurt your company
Error messages are like saying "You are stupid", or "Come on old fart, you still don't get it?" - and that's bad, it's almost like constantly telling your kid "No, no, no". Be preventive, defensive and avoid Design Bloopers like the the one at Cingular: Having tried to log into my account the following error message appears "My Account is Currently Closed". Can you imagine the horror that bubbles up and the thoughts of who to call (but how?)? As it turns out Cingular was just maintaining their server and the only flawed thing was the error message. Is it possible to measure how much this little flaw will hurt the company?
Misleading and almost terrifying error message at Cingular
Defensive Web Design
The beauty of usability design is to think of ways to prevent showing error messages at the first place. The most prominent example is probably Google. Have you ever seen an error message on Google? How great is the "Did you mean:" function... I even use it day by day as a spell checker, like I use google images to visualize words I didn't know (do you know what a vicuna is?).
Design Guidelines: Error Messages
Avoid error messages if possible.
Explicit indication that something has gone wrong
Human-readable language
Polite phrasing without blaming the user or imply that user is stupid or is doing something wrong
Precise descriptions of exact problems
Constructive advice on how to fix the problem
Visible and highly noticeable, both in terms of message itself and how it indicates which dialogue element users must repair
Preserve as much of the user’s work as possible
Reduce the work of correcting the error (e.g. list of possibilities)
Hypertext links may be used to connect a concise error message to a page with additional background information or explanation of the problem.
Did you ever encounter a 'special' error message?
Send me a screenshot and/or tell me the story behind it.
The 404 or Not Found error message is an HTTP standard response code indicating that the client was able to communicate with the server but either the server could not find what was requested, or it was configured not to fulfill the request and did not reveal the reason why.
Possible Reasons
Possible reasons for 404 error pages can be
click on a broken link
the page has been deleted
mistyped URL
Depending on your internet service provider (ISP) the standard 404 page can vary greatly in terms of visual display and information on the error itself. In order to not loose visitors it's strongly suggested to create a custom 404 page. A good custom 404 page will help people find the information they're looking for, as well as providing other helpful content and encouraging them to explore your site further.
Design Guidelines for 404 Pages
A good 404 error page conveys a right message and leads the visitor to where he intends to go:
Tell visitors clearly that the page they're looking for can't be found.
Use language that is easy to understand, non-technical, friendly and inviting.
Display an error message that explains what could have gone wrong.
Offer means to recover (e.g. list site's naming conventions, spell check functionality, most common problems).
Offer links to other important links of the site (e.g. most popular, homepage, FAQ).
Provide a way for users to report a broken link (easy form, email the webmaster).
Do not display ads.
Avoid redirection of 301 and 302.
Other Considerations
No matter how beautiful and useful your custom 404 page, you probably don't want it to appear in Google search results. In order to prevent 404 pages from being indexed by Google and other search engines, make sure that your webserver returns an actual 404 HTTP status code when a missing page is requested.
Got a nice 404 page?
Send me screenshots of your 404 error pages - I'd love to see them!
Thx to Claude Betancourt who sent me this 404 page (Figure 1) of Dow Jones Indexes telling me that "behind the scenes we capture all CGI and request scope variables, log it and email the admins to correct the error if necessary." Nicely done!
Hansel and Gretel using breadcrumbs to find their way home.
Nobody wants to get eaten by a wicked witch and neither do Hansel and Gretel in the tale Hänsel und Gretel by the Brothers Grimm. That's why the kids, as they are taken into the forest, leave little breadcrumbs behind so they can find their way home. I love the story (especially when the witch climbs into the oven to be baked) and the fact that Hansel and Gretel find their way home and see that the evil stepmother has died and everybody can live happily ever after.
Even though the metaphor of Hansel and Gretel is probably the origin of the term Breadcrumbs it is flawed because breadcrumbs do not represent the actual path the user has taken to any given page, but instead the optimal path from the homepage to the current page in the hierarchy.
Fairytale aside, here is how Breadcrumbs should be designed and implemented:
Design Guidelines for Breadcrumbs
Display breadcrumbs horizontally
Progress from the highest level to the lowest, one step at a time
Start with the homepage and end with the current page
Apply a simple text link for each level (except the current page)
Separator between levels is simple and one-character (usually “>”)
Levels show the site hierarchy – not the user’s history
"If links were married they'd get divorced all the time! That's because they can't keep their promise." (Gerry McGovern)
What Gerry means is that what links say they will do and what they actually do are total opposites. How many times have I believed, clicked and followed a link that promised me to 'Download this or that' just to find another page describing this piece of software. There I had to muddle through even more links just to find another 'Download version' link that yet again takes me to another page acknowledging the terms and conditions. The story could go on and on.
Remember: Good links are like magnets - they drive users to them.
With that in mind, here are the
Design Guidelines for Links
Color and underline link text (exceptions include lists of links like a navigation menu)
Reserve underlining for links (do not underline text that is not a link)
Use different colors for visited and unvisited links (e.g. shades of blue)
Avoid using color for text unless it is a link and never use blue for non-text links (even if your links are not blue)
Avoid changing the font style on mouse over
Avoid tiny text for links
Use appropriate spacing between links or use a clear separator
Use links primarily for navigation between pages
Link text must be describe the target as short and precise (clear call to action) as possible AND hold this promise!